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{9:48} They had already desired dissension before and had upset matters for you until the truth came and the ordinance of God appeared, while they were averse.
I suggest,
{9:48} They had sought sedition before and shuffled matters for you until the truth came and the ordinance of God appeared while they were resenting [it].Quote:
{9:49} And among them is he who says, "Permit me [to remain at home] and do not put me to trial." Unquestionably, into trial they have fallen. And indeed, Hell will encompass the disbelievers.
I'd only change the ending slightly,
{9:49} And among them is he who says, "Permit me [to remain at home] and do not put me to trial." Unquestionably, into trial they have fallen. And verily, Hell will be surrounding the disbelievers.