Excellent translation. I'll only make minor changes,
Quote:
{37:6} Indeed, We have adorned the nearest heaven with an adornment of stars
I suggest,
{37:6} Verily, We have adorned the nearest sky with an adornment, the planets.Quote:
{37:9} Repelled; and for them is a constant punishment,
I suggest,
{37:9} Chased away; and for them is a lasting torment,Quote:
{37:10} Except one who snatches [some words] by theft, but they are pursued by a burning flame, piercing [in brightness].
I suggest,
{37:10} Except one who makes off with a snatch [of news], but follows him a burning flame, piercing.