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{28:10} And the heart of Moses' mother became empty [of all else]. She was about to disclose [the matter concerning] him had We not bound fast her heart that she would be of the believers.
Excellent translation.
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{28:11} And she said to his sister, "Follow him"; so she watched him from a distance while they perceived not.
I suggest,
{28:11} And she said to his sister, "Track him;" Then she saw him nearby while they did not detect [her].Quote:
{28:12} And We had prevented from him [all] wet nurses before, so she said, "Shall I direct you to a household that will be responsible for him for you while they are to him [for his upbringing] sincere?"
I suggest,
{28:12} And We had prevented for him [all] suckling nurses before, so she said, "Shall I direct you to a household who will foster him for you and to him they are good counselors?"