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{28:29} And when Moses had completed the term and was traveling with his family, he perceived from the direction of the mount a fire. He said to his family, "Stay here; indeed, I have perceived a fire. Perhaps I will bring you from there [some] information or burning wood from the fire that you may warm yourselves."
I suggest,
{28:29} And when Moses had completed the term and traveled with his family, he noticed from the direction of the mount a fire. He said to his family, "Stay; I did notice a fire. Perhaps I will bring you from it [some] information or burning wood from the fire that you may heat yourselves."Quote:
{28:30} But when he came to it, he was called from the right side of the valley in a blessed spot - from the tree, "O Moses, indeed I am God, Lord of the worlds."
I suggest,
{28:30} But when he came to it, he was called from the shore of the fortuitous valley in the blessed spot - from the tree, "O Moses, verily I am God, Lord of the worlds."Quote:
{28:31} And [he was told], "Throw down your staff." But when he saw it writhing as if it was a snake, he turned in flight and did not return. [God said], "O Moses, approach and fear not. Indeed, you are of the secure.
I suggest,
{28:31} And [he was told], "Throw your staff." But when he saw it writhing as if it were a sprite, he turned away retreating and did not look back. [God said], "O Moses, approach and do not fear. Verily, you are of the secure."Quote:
{28:32} Insert your hand into the opening of your garment; it will come out white, without disease. And draw in your arm close to you [as prevention] from fear, for those are two proofs from your Lord to Pharaoh and his establishment. Indeed, they have been a people defiantly disobedient."
I suggest,
{28:32} "Insert your hand into the bosom opening of your garment; it will come out [shining] white, without harm. And draw in close to you your wing (arm) [as prevention] from fear, for those are two proofs from your Lord to Pharaoh and his court. Indeed, they have been a deviant folk."