Quote:
{27:32} She said, "O eminent ones, advise me in my affair. I would not decide a matter until you witness [for] me."
I suggest,
{27:32} She said, "O eminent ones, advise me in my affair. I would not decide a matter until you are present [with me]."Quote:
{27:33} They said, "We are men of strength and of great military might, but the command is yours, so see what you will command."
I suggest,
{27:33} They said, "We are [a people] of strength and of tough valor, but the command is yours, so see what you command."Quote:
{27:34} She said, "Indeed kings - when they enter a city, they ruin it and render the honored of its people humbled. And thus do they do.
I'd only change "humbled" to "humiliated",
{27:34} She said, "Indeed kings - when they enter a town, they ruin it and render the honored of its people humiliated. And thus they do."