Quote:
{14:46} And they had planned their plan, but with God is [recorded] their plan, even if their plan had been [sufficient] to do away with the mountains.
I suggest,
{14:46} And they had plotted, and with God is [recorded] their plotting, even as their plotting [is so big that] the mountains would recede because of it.This verse also rhymes beautifully with the preceding two verses. I wish I could translate the rhyme too.
Quote:
{14:47} So never think that God will fail in His promise to His messengers. Indeed, God is Exalted in Might and Owner of Retribution.
I suggest,
{14:47} So do not ever think that God is going to fail His promise to His messengers. Indeed, God is Unbeatable and has [mighty] retribution.